The Passion of Your Touch - Poem
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Your Touch
I’m starved for your embrace
A tender touch
To steal my breath
And make my heart to race
I long for your tenderness
To feel the sweetness of your breath
That raises the hair upon my neck
And makes my lungs gasp – in spasms of delight
Only your touch will ignite the flame within me
Please don’t let this fire die
I’m reaching out to you
Won’t you reach out to me too?
And, at the very least,
Let our fingers touch.
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Passion Dance
Warm eyes, Tender look
Teasing smile, Gentle touch
Skin tingles, Short of breath
Light headed dizziness.
Soft lips, Long kiss
Romantic dance, Inviting glance
Exploring hands, beating hearts
Bodies gleaming, beads of sweat
Longing, Writhing,
Groping, Sighing
Mind is flying, Paralyzing.
Heavy breathing, Chests are heaving
Hearts slowing, Bodies glowing
Soothing touch, Deep sighs
Heavy eyes, Peaceful Sleep
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Thank you Heart Felt,
It does make one feel good to relive the feelings of these kind of moments with the one we love.
OMG! I never new what was lurking beneath the calm, cool, collective woman you are! You rock!
Snicker,
Oh Kelly, I'm full of surprises!!
I can't believe it! I got you to read poetry!!!
Just what are you trying to say kim??
Really good writing...It gives good visions!
Let's just say, I was very inspired when I wrote these.
Nuf said!
Truly Passionate! Well done!
Thank you for stopping by Justsilvie. So happy you enjoyed the hub.
This reminds me of the time when my husband and I are still in the boyfriend-girlfriend stage, we both feel the warmth of our love just by merely touching!
Yes PaperNotes,
How wonderful, when those same feelings, last throughout the years of your marriage.
It can and does happen!
Keep writing like that, and I'll keep reading! lol.
Just keep reading Kelly, you may find more surprises about me!
..this is like a poetic dance and it's so seductive in its longing ....... and often (I find) using the most simple lean words is the most effective way of conveying one's message and you have certainly done that here - in flying poetic colors!
Lovely - full of life. I'm so pleased to read it, Miss_jkim! You write beautifully and feel exquisitely!
epigramman, you are so right. There is a time to use simplicity. Using the simplest of words, gives the reader's mind the ability to paint its own picture and ignite its own fire. Thank you
Nellieanna, I am pleased to have you read it and am honored that you, oh lady of exquisite words, found it to your liking.
Keep it coming you're simply awesome
Thanks for the vote of confidence ek ellis, I will try to continue to put my best pen forward.
.I must return to a classic because you said it all in this one - and I love it - and your words too!
Such kind words, Colin. I am truly pleased that it gave you pleasure, to read it.
Very pretty!
Thank you Micky, I am honord to have you as a reader.
There is nothing like the ache for a touch. Should you or shouldn't you. That sweet release when two people embrace or hold hands so tightly.We all have been there.
Thank you Little Kim,
I am honored to have you as a reader. This has to be one of my favorite pieces.
Easy to see why it is.
make me thirsty and longing for love.......
wonderful!
Glad you found it to your liking, Berga.
Very passionate and nicely written. Voted beautiful. Reminds me of the poem I wrote called Dreams of My Lover
Thank you for reading and for the vote, BethanyLynn. I will visit your poem as well.
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Heart Felt Book Level 1 Commenter 16 months ago
this is so amazing!!I love OMG! very sexy and unconditionally living the life of safe happiness.. I am just all over the place.. I remember when I firsts wrote a poem like this I remember the feeling Fabulous!! Thanks for sharing voted across... Bless